If
you were to change one event or chapter from the Iliad, and replace it
with your own story, what chapter or episode will that be?
Write your “version” of the story.
While I was reading the Epic Poem, The Iliad, there were these questions lingering in my head. "WHAT IF..." questions were like monsters in my head trying to find out what could have happened if a certain part / scene in the story is changed.
The Greek Gods can't control the will of the humans but can motivate their emotions and manipulate nature.
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Zeus and Thetis |
The flow of the story would be like this...
The epic poem begins the same but when the goddess Thetis approached Zeus to
bring glory to Achilles, he would then grant the plead. After, Zeus communicated with King Agamemnon in his dreams and encouraged Agamemnon to
attack Troy. Thus, Agamemnon took this advice and immediately called a
meeting among his highest officials. In the meeting, they concluded to attack the city of Priam, Troy. Even though the most officials did not want to because they have a bad feeling of what would happen, they immediately set sail towards Troy.
BUT BEFORE THAT...
During the time when King Agamemnon had no choice but to give back the daughter of the Priest of Apollo, he demanded for someone in exchange and he chose Briseis, The wife of Achilles, and this made him furious and decided not to join the Greek Army, remember?
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Achilles |
In my VERSION, when
Agamemnon asked for Briseis,
Achilles thinks if he would join the battle or not. He has to choose between 2 things: First, if he would go to the battlefield, or second, if
he will be left behind during the war. But in spite of all the
second thoughts that had come to his mind because of the lost of his wife, Briseis, he then made his decision to join the Greek Army by hook or by crook.
In spite of all the problems that Achilles is undergoing like the lost
of Briseis, he will first forget all of his problems and he will
concentrate on the battle instead.
In this scene, we could see that even though Briseis was taken away from Achilles, He would still be strong and he would be brave enough to let go of her and face the Raging Trojans instead. Also, He would also choose to fight in the side of the Trojans and will do anything to win the war.
Going Back...
As they sail towards Troy, Poseidon helped them in crossing the stormy seas and raging waves. When they arrived at the
beach, Troy was more than ready at their arrival. Agamemnon led his
army swiftly, guided by Athena and protected by Hera. Zeus, on the other hand,ignored this
for now for he wants Troy to suffer.
Then still the same from Iliad, up the part where Hera put Zeus to sleep.
The Almighty Zeus got pissed off that he threw the other gods and goddesses opposing him namely, Hera, Poseidon,
Hephaestus, Athena and Hermes, to name a few. While the Gods were recovering
from the pain they felt, Zeus took advantage of this and granted
Achilles and Hector their stage in the war so that they would fight fiercely
for so many days. The gods who opposed Zeus assembled themselves and composed a
plan that would summon the Titans from their prison. They took the best officials of the Achaean, including Agamemnon, to where the Titans were held captives and granted them the strength of Gods to be able to free the Titans. These people went on and on fighting the guards that the Gods
made to protect the prison where the Titans are held.
The Greek Army are about to lose the battle
of Troy but with Achilles by their side, they were able to keep their head held high and their spirit strong. In
the end, they reached a truce because the bloodshed made was too much on both
sides, neither was winning or losing, no soldier wanted to fight anymore, and their resources are becoming limited.The battle of Troy became
forgotten but the legend that the Achaean officials, including the King,
disappeared that contributed to many speculations years after. Many years after the war, the
Titans were freed from their prison, they would follow no one but themselves. They
fought against the Gods for revenge on their almost eternal torment and suffering. Agamemnon and his colleagues are successful with the gods still helping
them. The gods were also confused that most of them do not know which
side to choose. Zeus chose Hector and Achilles as his hands that would
fight against the other gods and the Titans, for he is too tired of
fighting.
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Gods Vs. Titans |
In this sense, I thought that this would be the start of a new Epic where it focuses on the battle between the GODS, the TITANS, & the MORTALS where I think would be very interesting to find out what will happen now that the Mortals are involved in the conflict between the GODS and TITANS.
How would these changes affects the entire Epic?
Out of the changes I made in the Epic, I have drawn certain effects of it on the whole story of the Iliad.
First, when Achilles chose to fight with the Greeks rather than deciding to not side with them just because of a woman, the POSSIBLE effect would be that his presence in the war would be a great alas for he is feared by the Trojans.
Second, as Achilles were able to join the war without any distractions in his way, another POSSIBLE effect would be that Patroclus, his most beloved comrade, will not die as he tried to dress up like Achilles and tried to lead the Greek Army where he met his death in the hands of Hector.
Lastly, there would be no much effect on the ending of the story for Achilles died before The Achaeans won the war against Troy. But the BIGGEST DIFFERENCE happened in my version of the Epic Poem, Achilles did everything to win the war, faced the Trojans from the very start of the war, and shocking events were prevented because of the changes I made.
Even though some changes were done in the story, or whatever change we try to do in the story,
THE ILIAD OF HOMER WILL STILL REMAIN AS THE GREATEST EPIC POEM EVER WRITTEN IN HISTORY.
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